Detective of Evillious: Chapters 1 and 2

Chapter 1: A Murderer and Dead Conchita


Inside a mansion,cries could be heard. This mansion,is the one that almost everybody Gallerian knew lived in,just because of his Daughter's reasons.

Gallerian slowly walked towards a corpse,shaking.
Margarita and Kayo were crying,a rare sight.
Riliane and Allen were silent,not the usual.
And the final one at the scene,Venomania,had been pacing back and forth,questions popping one after another.

Gallerian checked for a pulse.
Dead.

He turned to everyone,a sad expression on his face,"...Everybody,Banica's dead...".

The news had made Margarita and Kayo cry harder,Banica and the two of them had been a trio of best friends,till now.

Riliane then started whispering to Allen,her fears of who the Murderer was being whispered.

Venomania took a last look at Banica's lifeless body,before walking out of the room.


Who was the Murderer? Nobody knows,but they all suspected each other....


Riliane actually had tried to cover her view of Banica using her fan,she didn't want to see the body of her friend,dead.

She finally decided to take a look at Banica,a shocked expression appearing on her face.

Banica hadn't been poisoned,no. She was stabbed several times in the stomach,a pen-knife stuck in her throat,probably to prevent Banica for calling help.

Her hands were in a awkward position,almost as if someone had broken her bones.
Finally,someone had obviously tried to burn her,from the loads of burn marks she had. Most of them were severe,someone tried to cook her,from the looks of it.


Riliane covered her view once more,"We certainly have a merciless Murderer on our hands...".

"Yes we do,but I'll protect you if anybody tries to kill ou,M'lady" Allen whispered,his face was in fear as well,who could be next,he doesn't know.

"Father!" A voice could be heard.

Gallerian's eyes widened,"Margarita! Make sure she doesn't see!". He hurried over to his Daughter,the one calling him.

Margarita shakily walked over to Banica's body,carrying her over to the corner of the room. Tears rolled down her cheeks as she saw the multiple burn marks and stabs.


"A Murderer you say? Well,this could be interesting..."

MA walked into the room,quickly taking a look at everyone before walking towards Margarita and Banica's corpse,A grin slowly formed on her face.

"Dear Margarita,who do you think could've done this?"

"I...I...I..."

"You can't decide,can you?" MA gave Margarita a sympathetic look,"We might as well know who he or she is soon...".

Margarita looked at MA,she then smiled gently,"Yeah,we might as well know...".




Chapter 2: The Twin Deaths and Sin's Meeting

A few days later,everyone in the Mansion had known about the Murder. Everybody suspected MA and Gammon the most,because with MA's brains and Gammon's swift speed,who knows? They could have been the Murderers.

Now a rumor had been spreading. The rumor was that Gallerian,MA and Gammon had been the Murderers,planning to kill everyone else.

Of course,Gammon and Gallerian rejected this,while MA had decided not to answer.



Everyone had been doing their daily activities when,a scream was heard.

Almost everybody had run to the scream,only to find Riliane and Allen's corpses.


A gasp came from Margarita,who fell on her knees,"No...no...!".

Gallerian had been the last to arrive,the Mansion was quite big.
With the commotion he saw,Margarita crying,Venomania eyeing everyone,Kayo praying,it seemed like a weird thing.

Well,not when he found out what had happened.


Allen had multiple slashes on his body,the most noticed being two giant slashes that represented a "X" on his back and chest.

Riliane almost seemed fine,but on further inspection,you could find a giant wound in her back,a knife remaining there.
The wound had been so big,it'd look like the knife didn't make it,a good guess was that the Murderer twisted the knife around when it was in Riliane's back.

Both seemed to have died from loss of blood,their blood staining the floor.


MA turned to face Gallerian,a sick smile showing,"Hm,well,well...looks like that arrogant Princess and that Servant are gone...".

Gallerian,who was horrified from the sight,turned to MA,"Yeah,they're gone alright....".

Venomania called the remaining sins to stay back for a meeting.
A meeting on who the Murderer was.


Gallerian,Venomania,Margarita,Kayo,MA,Gammon,Master of the Court(Gallerian's Daughter),Servant,Master of the Graveyard,GEAR,Master of the Hellish Yard and finally Waiter stayed.

"Alright,let's start this meeting off by this one question: Who do you think is the Murderer?" Said Venomania.

"Master of the Graveyard! She could've asked her Servants to kill Banica,Riliane and Allen!" Shouted Waiter,a look of disgust crossing her face.

"No,it couldn't be...Master of the Graveyard would've eaten them,and the Servants wouldn't make the death that noticeable..." Gammon replied.

"Gammon's right,it couldn't have been Master of the Graveyard and her Servants,you three may leave..." Venomania pointed at the door.
Master of the Graveyard and Servants slowly left.


"How about Kayo? I've heard that she likes Gallerian,and Banica likes Gallerian too,so that's a obvious reason..." Margarita said,giving Kayo a sad look.

"No,that's just based on rumors,we need real information Margarita",Gallerian said.

Venomania once again pointed at the door,and Kayo left.

"Hm...well,based on how I see it,I think MA and Gammon could've done it..." Gallerian said.

"What would ever make you say that? What would be my intention,Gallerian?" Gammon stared at Gallerian,demanding a response.

"...You want the Venom Sword to get rid of your curse,correct? Then I'm sure you might have the intention to kill Venomania in order to get it,the other Murders are just distractions from your real goal..." Gallerian said,glaring at Gammon.

"What about me then?" MA asked.

"Pft,you would just kill us for your sick amusement,MA...don't make me laugh" Waiter responded,she was looking at every single person in the room,her suspicion arising.

MA laughed,"Maybe I would,maybe I wouldn't,you'd never know...".

"Alright,let's continue this tomorrow,it's getting pretty late already..." Margarita yawned,looking at the sunset out through the window.

"Right,we should" Venomania said.
Gallerian was the first to walk out of the room,he could've cared less about almost everyone,except his Daughter.

'Who is the Murderer though...' That question remaining in his mind.